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Wesley Fenza's avatar

For god's sake, YOU MUST CHANGE THE SUBTITLE! Calling it "years 1-4" leads any normal viewer to think you mean it's for 1-year-olds to 4-year-olds. It wasn't until halfway down your post that I saw you meant *grades* 1-4. You absolutely, without a doubt, must change it. "Grades 1-4" would be fine, or something else if you don't want to reinforce the grade level system. But "years 1-4" cannot be the subtitle if you want your audience to understand what you're offering.

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Leah Libresco Sargeant's avatar

Ok, three notes, one minor, one bigger, one about Kickstarter broadly:

1) is the Eganize my Project art AI? Using AI art, esp on a paid project, is a dealbreaker for a subset of KS backers.

2) it feels like the tone of your initial pitch is to frustrated homeschoolers, but I’m wondering if that’s your target audience or if it’s proficient homeschoolers who want to get more under the hood/customize. If someone *doesn’t* feel stymied, the initial pitch may be telling them it’s not for them.

Either way, definitely a help to have a sample lesson for download to see what you think.

3) finally there are two very different approaches to KS goal setting. You can set your *real* goal or a much much lower one with the goal of building momentum by clearing it quickly and then adding stretch goals to summit (all on the way to your real target). The latter is common in rpg kickstarters, where people want to join a popular and successful project.

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